Fiction! I stole perfect beauty from her eyes

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25 Mar 2024
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Elara, a wisp of a girl with hair like spun moonlight, had eyes that mirrored the summer sky – boundless turquoise flecked with gold. They were the envy of the village nestled amidst the whispering pines. I, on the other hand, possessed eyes as dull as river stones. In mine, ambition resided, a relentless fire that yearned for something more than the predictable rhythm of village life.

One frosty night, a traveling storyteller, cloaked in shadows and whispers, arrived. He spoke of a hidden lake, guarded by ethereal creatures, where one could barter anything for their deepest desire. Intrigued, I sought him out, drawn by the promise of changing my destiny. The storyteller, his voice a rasp, confirmed the legend, a wicked glint in his serpent-like eyes. He spoke of a terrible price, a life for a life, but my ambition drowned out the warning.

The journey was arduous, a gauntlet of treacherous paths and howling winds. Finally, nestled amongst snow-capped peaks, I found it - a lake so still it reflected the cosmos above. Ethereal figures, their forms shimmering like moonlight on water, materialized. A chilling beauty emanated from them, but their eyes held an unsettling vacancy. I offered them a vial of my most prized possession - my grandmother's laughter, captured in a forgotten locket. In return, they demanded a piece of my soul, a chilling promise I readily agreed to, blinded by ambition.

They dipped a spectral hand into the lake, and when it emerged, it held a single teardrop, shimmering with an otherworldly light. "Let it fall upon your eyes," they intoned, their voices an echo in the frozen air. As I did, a searing pain erupted, then an icy numbness. When it subsided, I peered into the reflection of the lake. My eyes, once dull and unremarkable, now mirrored Elara's perfect turquoise.

Returning to the village, I was met with gasps. Elara, my closest friend, approached, her gaze lingering on my eyes. A flicker of something akin to fear crossed her face, then a chilling emptiness settled in its place. My heart lurched. It wasn't just the color – the vibrancy, the sparkle that had captivated everyone, it seemed to have leeched the life from Elara's own eyes. They were now dull, the same lifeless gray as mine had been.

The villagers showered me with praise. My newfound beauty opened doors I never thought possible – suitors flocked, invitations to lavish gatherings poured in. Yet, a hollowness gnawed at me. Elara, once my confidante, became a ghost of her former self, withdrawn and vacant. The joy that once danced in her eyes was extinguished, replaced by a haunting sadness.
One starlit night, unable to bear the weight of my actions, I confessed everything to Elara. Tears, the kind that held the weight of a shattered soul, spilled from her vacant eyes. "You stole not just the color," she whispered, her voice hollow, "but the light within them, the stories they held."

Grief, sharp and unforgiving, clawed at me. I yearned to undo my actions, but the storyteller's words echoed in the emptiness of my soul – a life for a life. The ethereal creatures, I knew, wouldn't relinquish their bargain.

Desperate, I sought the help of the village elder, a woman steeped in forgotten lore. She spoke of a hidden grove guarded by ancient spirits, a place where one could offer a heartfelt sacrifice to appease grievances. The journey was fraught with peril – treacherous swamps and whispering shadows. Finally, in the heart of the grove, I found the ancient spirits, beings of pure energy that pulsed like the earth itself.

I poured my heart out, confessing my transgression, offering everything I possessed - my newly acquired beauty, the respect of the villagers, even my own life. As I spoke, the air crackled with unseen energy. Then, a single, shimmering teardrop, the color of Elara's stolen beauty, materialized before me.

The journey back was a blur. When I reached Elara, the emptiness in her eyes had deepened. But before she could turn away, I placed the teardrop against her closed eyelids. A gasp escaped her lips. When she opened her eyes, the familiar sparkle, the warmth that had been missing, returned. Tears, this time of relief and joy, streamed down her face. The color in her eyes remained, but alongside it bloomed a new depth, a resilience that hadn't been there before.

My reflection, however, was a stark contrast. The stolen beauty was gone, replaced by a swirling vortex of grey. Even the fire of ambition had dimmed, replaced by a quiet acceptance. The villagers, once fawning over me, barely noticed me now.
Elara, with her newfound strength, became a beacon

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